我写信给你想问下这个职位的招聘进展,我还在等待你的电话通知我面试,我非常想获得这个职位,如有其他情况,也请您回函告知.
I'm writing you to inquire about my application for this position.I'm currently still waiting for your call about my interview.I really want thisposition,so if there's any issues,please let me know by writing back.
这样翻译比较地道、
自己认真翻译的,有问题请追问、希望及时采纳—— ♥ 多谢 ⌒_⌒