英语日记,求高手指出错误并做适当修改.
September 5th 2010
Today is loudly day,but in afternoon the sun is coming.Now ouside is very hot.so i make a decision：i stay ai home and write my homework until tonight.
my homework have recite the text and vocabulary,write a diaty and so on.I don't like recite the text,because it is too boring and easy be foget.But I have to recite it.my Chinese will mad at me If I don't do that...
Expected teomorrow is a luck day!
easy to be forgotten 这样改是为什么？
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解答
September 5th 2010
Today is a cloudly day,but in the afternoon the sun is coming. Now it is very hot outside,so i make a decision：i will stay at home and write my homework until tonight.
My homework is to recite the text and vocabulary, write a diaty and so on. I don't like recite the text, because it is too boring and easy to be forgotten.But I have to recite it. my Chinese teacher will mad at me If I don't do that...
Expected tomorrow is a luck day!
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