谁帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有语法错误 Things do not change; we change.Sell your clothes and keep yo
Things do not change; we change.Sell your clothes and keep your thoughts.
Today we have higher buildings and wider highways,but shorter temperaments and narrower points of view;
We have bigger houses,but smaller families;
We have more medicines ,but less health;
We have much more food,but less nutrition;
That‘s why I propose,that as of today;
You do not keep anything for a special occasion.because every day that you live is a special occasion.
Search for knowledge,read more ,sit on your porch and admire the view without paying attention to your needs;
Spend more time with your family and friends,eat your favorite foods,visit the places you love;
Life is a chain of moments of enjoyment; not only about survival;
Do not delay anything that adds laughter and joy to your life;
Every day,every hour,and every minute is special;
And you don't know if it will be your last.
人气:101 ℃ 时间:2020-04-09 05:09:38
解答
呵呵 是一篇英语演讲稿么?写得不错.
第二行 but shorter temperaments and narrower points of view;
建议改为 shorterfuse(have a short fuse 脾气暴躁的,易怒的)and narrower vision(保持句式一致)
第四行We have more medicines ,but less health; 建议改为we have more advanced medical and health conditions,but poorer health(健康貌似不能说多少)
第七行You do not keep anything for a special occasion. 建议改为Do not save something for a special occasion.
第八行Search for knowledge, read more ,sit on your porch and admire the view without paying attention to your needs; 建议改为 aspire for more knowledge, read more, follow your heart and walk your own way.
第九行Spend more time with your family and friends, eat your favorite foods, visit the places you love; foods 建议改为food
第十行Do not delay anything that adds laughter and joy to your life; delay建议改为overlook
最后一行 and建议改为 because
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