在你的句子中,形容词子句 “which……”是俢饰“social work”的.“especially in English”成了插入语.你这样写既看不到英语与社会工作的关系也看不到与取得工作经验之间的关系.我试改： Ihave deep love for the social work which make me get lots of work expeience ,especcially when Itry to communicate with other people in English.
供你参考,当然你可以进一步俢改.