请高手帮我改个短文（有语法等错误的）,顺便告诉为什么?
I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from 1___
you.I'm glad you have made such a great progress 2___
that you can write your e-mail good Chinese.I read 3___
your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you 4___
sent it to me.How time flies!Our friendship has lasted 5___
for several months.We have got to know but learned a 6___
lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that you life in 7___
your country is quite different from me.Thanks again 8___
for writing to me.I'm looking forward to hear from 9___
you soon.Best wishes to you and your family.10___