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The rapid development of the knowledge economy made the internet to be a themes.It is not only a symbolize of the fashion and trend,but also a country’s embodiment of the technological level even the comprehensive national strength.Although we begin the computer very late,but it is swift in action.Depend on the data display from the CNNI :cut off date from Julne,2001,the onliner of the China more than twenty million,thereinto ,there are a large number of teenager.But what are they doing on the internet?What’s the influence of the internet?Advantages or disadvantages?It influences the teenager’s Physical and Mental Health as well as their philosophy、v alues so many areas.We need to analysis the immanent cause of the internet’s influence so that we can enhance the management on the web and supervision by public opinion,promote the Internet industry develop in a healthy way for the public,especially the teenagers.请帮我改改语法,
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1,It is not only a symbolize of the fashion and trend,这句,改成倒装会更高级:not only is it ……
2.Although we begin the computer very late,这句不好,根据你的意思可以修改成Although we didn‘t make a great progress in early years.
3,Depend-->Depending,teenager--->teenagers
4,their philosophy、v alues so many areas.顿号改逗号,英语没顿号.so many areas改成and so on
5,We need to analysis the immanent cause of the internet’s influence so that we can enhance the management on the web and supervision by public opinion,promote the Internet industry develop in a healthy way for the public,especially the teenagers最后一句有点混乱,不一定非要用上so that 句型,而且especially the teenagers 也略显啰嗦.
the immanent cause of the internet’s influence should be analysised that the management on the web and supervision by public opinion will be enhanced.In all,let us go for it to make a more harmony environment of Internet!
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