谁帮我改改这段我写的英语作文呀!
For example,I did not like history class when I was a junior school student.My historical teacher,however,once leaded us to visit a historical museum.I saw many ancient tools,building and works of art from the period of human evolution.These human long history and culture was deeply attracted me.Through this method,not only it increases my interest in history subject but also better make me understands the content of textbook.
有点幼稚.谁能帮我改改.有些句子能减缩就减缩.