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Formerly,I had a good friend,she name is coral.
She wears a short hair ang wears a black frame glasses.She looks very clever,and her eyes always shine with wisdom.She hasn't a lot of word.when she unfamiliar with you,but when she regards you as her friend,she will treat you as her family members.
I loved her very much when I first met her.After that,we became good friend quickly.
She was good at English but poor in chenistry and I was just right contrary with her.We often help with each other.she often has a interesting idea.she is simple and unaffected.I felt happy when I stay by her side.We both like cole flower very much,we agree that we would went to JiangXi to appreciate cole flower.
But one day I quarreled with she.She think I had too much friends and I always neglceted her.I felt angry ang wronged when I heard that,and I used a lot of hureful words.
After that,she unwilling to took notice of me.I was too late for regrets.
I truely want to tell her that I never neglect her.I did know she was important to me .I love she,I can't lose she.But I hardly have chance.
Now I learn how to take good care of frienglyness,but I have lost my love——coral
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解答
Formerly,I had a good friend,her name is coral.
She had a short hair and worn a black frame glasses.She looked very clever,and her eyes always shined with wisdom.She hadn't a lot of words,when she unfamiliar with you but when she regards you as her friend,she would treat you as her family members.
I loved her very much when I first met her.After that,we became good friend quickly.
She was good at English but poor in chenistry and I was just right contrary to her.We often helped with each other.she often had a interesting idea.she was simple and unaffected.I felt happy when I stayed by her side.We both liked cole flower very much,we agreed that we would went to JiangXi to appreciate cole flower.
But one day I quarreled with her. She thought I had too many friends and I always neglceted her.I felt angrywhen I heard that,and I used a lot of hureful words.
After that,she was unwilling to took notice of me.It was too late to regret.
I truely wanted to tell her that I never neglect her.I did know she was important to me .I love she,I can't lose she.But I hardly have chance.
Now I learn how to take good care of frienglyness,but I have lost my love——coral
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