【She seemed very sadly.】应该改为She seemed very sad.句意为她看起来十分伤心.seem为系动词,此句中为主系表结构,不需要用副词.
【She said that she had a big fight for her parents .】两个错误.应该改为She said that she had had a big fight with her parents.句意为她说她和她爸妈大吵一架.间接引语中主句中用的为过去时said,那么引语中表示过去发生的事情要用过去完成时.另外与...吵架是fight with,固定的.fight for是为...而战斗.
【I went to a concert the last night.】应该改为I went to a concert last night.我昨晚去看了场音乐会.昨晚就是last night ,不需要加冠词the
【My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.】改为My cousin is crazy about a pop singer句意为我堂妹对一个流行歌手十分着迷.这是说明一种事实,她现在仍然对歌手着迷,要用一般现在时.
【She buys all of his CDs and listens his music every day.】改为She has bought all of his CDs and listens his music every day.句意为她已经买了他是所有的CD,并且每天都听他的歌.买CD应该是过去已经完成的事并对现在有影响.应该也可以改成过去式.
【She goes to all of his concert and cares about anything about her.】此句有两处错误,改为She has gone to all of his concert and cares about everything about her.句意为她去了他的每一场演唱会而且对关于他的一切都十分关心.我认为去演唱会要强调一个“已经”意思,嗯,应该也可以改成过去式吧.是关心他的每一件事,肯定句中用everything.
【I guess that's show they scolded her.】应该为I guess that's show why they scolded her.关于这个句子我一开始还没看懂..后来才想明白,句意为我猜想这就解释了为什么他们要责备她.句子中有三套主谓结构,因此关系词肯定有两个,前面的宾语从句的that是省略掉了,但是why不能省.
【I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents.】应该改为I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents'.注意是在最后的parents这个词后加一撇.句意为我希望堂妹会明白这是她的错而不是她父母的.是“不是父母的错误”,因此要用名词所有格形式.
呃,没找到别的了.大概就是这些了吧.其中有两个我不太确定,就是我改成现在完成时的那两个.晕了晕了..
还有啊,我找到了不止9个错.你自己根据自己最近学的取舍吧.非常感谢你咯！辛苦啦\(^o^)/~采纳吧 - -...