等等,我正在改,比较可靠.
第一篇：
It snowed last night.This morning the road 【加was】covered with snow ,but there【we're——were估计你打错了】 still a lot【加of】 bikes coming and going.Suddenly I saw a woman 【walk——fall】 off her bike.The woman 【lied—lay】on the ground and couldn't get up.I ran up to her and tried to help her,【and——but】 she still couldn't stand up because her right leg 【is——was】 broken.At that moment.【the——a】 policeman came over when he saw this.Immediately,he called 【at去掉】 a taxi.The taxi driver sent the woman to【the】 nearest hospital.There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there the 【wholly—whole】 story.【Seen——Seeing】 that the woman was well looked after,I said goodbye to her.Before I left,the lady thanked me again ang again.
麻烦你再对一下原文,看看是否有打错的,多出了错误处.
第二篇：
When I was doing my homework,the phone rang.【She——It】 was Jane.She wanted to speak to my 【older——elder 】brother.i told her that he had left 【for去掉】 home just a few minutes before.I asked her to ring up again tonight,【and-but】 she said 【tjat _that】she wouldn't be free.So I asked her 【that——if/whether】 she'd like to leave a message.Jane said there would be 【the——a】 lecture on English poetry by a 【visited ——visiting】professor in the Lecture Hall 【at】around 6:00 tomorrow evening.And she asked me to tell my brother not【加to】 be late.She would wait for him at the gate.I told her I would tell him 【direct——directly】【加he 】came back.
原文还是有打错的啊,不过,该改的应该都改出来了.希望能够帮到你!