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you were so charming when you were playing basketball.
that's why I loved you .
and that time in my eyes ,you are a tall,thin,handsome ,healthy and perfect boy.
you came to my heart at once.
and no one could take the place of you at the moment.
but now I must say sorry to you .
because I have hurt you deeply.
I promise that I will never forget the time with you .
it is so bright and wondful.
you are the first boy to me.
you are a really good boy.
I hope you will find a girl whom will be much better than I.
Thanks for you loved me.
Thanks,I am so sorry.