1.I more and more like this major 最好改成 I like this major more and more.
2.People's lives 应该用单数,life表示生活时是不可数的
3.Although I am far from Fujian,but life is also full of joy.去掉but或者although,这两个词不能同时出现,用although或者though的时候表示转折可以用yet或者不用.
4.They are friendly,lovely girl.girl用复数girls
5.We went to class together,eat together,learn together,and play together.这句也不算是错误,但是很累赘,可以写成 We went to class,eat ,learn and play together.
6.Life is full of sun.我理解你的意思应该是想说生活充满阳光吧~所以把sun改成sunshine比较好.
7.Now I want to do is get good grades in my studies.应该是一个主语从句,要在I 前面加一个引导词what.而且get这个动词原形不能作表语,要么用getting,要么用to get
8.target 应该是和 reach搭配用的,achieve可以和dream一起用,但是和target不太合适.
就是这样啦~别看我列出这么多,其实总体来说也没什么特别大的问题
希望LZ能明白这些细节