This is me My name is XXX.This is meMy name is XXX.I am a girl .M_英语解答

This is me My name is XXX.
This is me
My name is XXX.I am a girl .My English name is Eva.I'm in class Two ,Grade one.I Iike sports.My favroite sport is table tennis and swimming.I think they are healthy for me.I lile music.I think music is relaxing.My favorite subject is science.My science teacher is strictfor us.But she is kind.
this is me.
是自我介绍,看看有没有语病,哪里能写得好一点,
麻烦翻译一下

人气：294 ℃　时间：2019-11-23 23:01:42

解答

hi everybody.
My name is XXXX. My english name is Eva. i am a girl as you see. Now, i am a class two,Grade one students. i like sports and music. My favorite sports is table tennis and swimming . i thinks do some sports can make me stronger. the reason i like music cause the music can make me more relax. specially, when i finish the school works.i also like science. even our science teacher is strict to us. but sometimes she is kind. so i like her. this is me. i hope you can know me more.