关于英语句子的时态
she said since the day she went to school,she was extremely delighted and felt a strong sense of accomplishment coz she learnt many new things and made loads of good friends.
这是我写的作文里的一句话,有没有什么时态上的问题,应该怎么改呢?（烦告知错误原因）总觉得读着别扭