不对.应该为这样：The detective who excepted for the parcel that full of diemonds,was come from South Africa.
先行词做主语、关系代词不能省略.
类比一下he is from China你就知道为什么后面也要改了.
学习加油!��������ǰ���Ǵ��Ϸ�����不好意思..上面的回答错了...应该The detective who excepted for the parcel that full of diemonds,came from South Africa.如果要表达的是包裹是从南非来的..应该这样：The detective excepted for the parcel which came from South Africa and full of diemonds