while然而therefore因此from my point of view我的观点是……还有呢。。as正如though虽然多来一点there is no denying that毫无疑问……as far as I am concerned我认为……In a word 总而言之so……as to……如此……以至于……因此怎么说so如果我们沉迷于电脑，这可能会影响与父母的关系怎么说。。谢谢If I am addicted to the computer,it might have a negative effect on the relationship between my parents and me.谢谢你，有不会的我在问你~\(≧▽≦)/~哦pay more attention to doing还是dodoingparents are too tired for looking after us这句话有没有语病。。后面是to looktoo...to.. 不是太...以至于不能....吗？我想写的是父母照顾我们太累该怎么说呢。parents spare no effort to look after us everyday so that they are too tired.spare no effort不遗余力尝试分享好玩的事情怎么说try to share joytry to不是努力做吗try doing 不是尝试吗？在高中都认为是等同的，而且高中更多用 to do老师讲的是doing而且区分的很严格。。好吧