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Television is playing more and more important role in today.But nowadays,more and more people think television broken the relationship of family members.I think this opinion is a little extreme views.
I think we have to know some news from TV every day.Now the technology develop so fast.Maybe some of us have no time to read the news from newspaper.So we should know the world from TV.We can watch TV with our family members and we can discuss the news with them,too.So I think it is a good way to get together with them.
If someone must hold that it is TV that alienates the relationship of family members.I want to tell them.TV is one of all the reasons,but it is not TV that took somebody from his family.We have a number of productions now.Maybe computer or mobile phone is the real “killer”,too.The reason why some of us feel TV alienated the relationship of family members is that we have not talked with them for a long time.
It is my opinion that we should talk and communicate with our family members and friends.Not only talk to them,but also listen to them.Then we can obtain much more happiness from our families.
Therefore,I do not agree that TV has destroyed communication among family.
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In modern time,many people discuss where we should get knowledge.Some of them think we should obtain the knowledge from book.Others say we should gain knowledge from our experience.Well,in my view,I think experience is more important for us.
First,people are learning through their whole life.We can know how to eat,how to drink,how to dress clothes and so on from experience.And it is hard to understand them from book.The best way to do these things is experience.We have to do these things by ourselves.It is better than we get these from book.
Furthermore,are all the of books right?I think it is not.For example,the history is Japanese history book.Some mistakes are in the book.If we believe book so much,maybe we will make some mistakes in the future.We should read books,but we can’t depend on books so much.We should believe ourselves,believe our real experience.Our best leaders are our real experience.
In addition,book is based on experience.One writes a book should use his own experience.Maybe it is not suit everybody.Everyone also have their own experience.So everyone can have their own book.So experience is more important than book.
To sum up,I want to say,it is so important to get the knowledge from book,but it is more important to gain knowledge from our own experience.That is one of the best ways to lead us to success.