1.he closed the door with a bang,entering the house.
觉得没有这样改好: He entered the house, closing the door with a bang.
因为进入是瞬时发生的.
2.Tom rushed into the room( covering)with snow
应该是covered, Tom is covered with snow,要用被动分词
3.he ate his dinner,with chopsticks using=he used chopsticks ate dinner
也不对he ate his dinner,with chopsticks 就可以了,后面应该是He used chopsticks to eat dinner.
4.As he saw that it was rainningJohn put on his rain coat.=Seeing thait was rainningJohn put on his rain coat.
这2句没有问题.

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