帮我看看这篇日记有没有毛病 Friday,March 21st Win
帮我看看这篇日记有没有毛病
Friday,March 21st Windy,cloudy.
Today was so cold.When I got home,I saw there is a little shoot in a pot.Oh,that's my sunflower shoot!Two weeks ago,my English teacher,Miss Lee gave me some flower seeds.I planted a sunflower seed in the pot.I watered it every day.Four days ago,shoot appeared.I was so excited!It grew up so fast.Now there are two leaves.I think there will be more and more leaves.I hope it grow well better and better.
人气:106 ℃ 时间:2020-06-17 12:46:06
解答
语法问题太多了第一句话是正常时态,因为你说这一整天那还麻烦你一一指点最后一句错了要怎么改?well better怎么能配在一起呢?你是想说will吗?对啊…打错了但这个will的位置不对will和grow调转了正确的:It will grow better and better你这个写的不错啊,语法都基本正确好哒只是内容我觉得对于我来说幼稚肤浅了一点罢了。I hope it will grow better and better我把hope给忘了When I got home, I saw there is a little shoot in a spot这句话错了怎么改?When I went home或When I arrived home后面there后面过去式,is改成was改了其他应该没大问题了
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