看你的简历蛮好,我试着尽力翻翻哦,不尽如人意的还请谅解哦,呵呵
About Language:
I've past CET4 and CET6, with a skillful ability in English listening, speaking, reading and writing.
About Computer:
I'm proficient in the use of office software
下面这些不应该放这儿吧?
July 2008 - June 2010: I completed all the courses in the Civil Rights Project classes (with a certificate要不要这句应该都行吧),which was sponsored by Government of the Netherlands, and cooperated by the Humanity College of Northeast Normal University and the Human Rights Institute of Danish. (后句太长了,所以变了语序)
September 2007 - June 2011: I studied at Jilin Finance and Economics University
About Learning:
Year 2009-2010, I attained in the first semester, and first-rate in the second semester.
Year 2008-2009, I attained the third-rate scholarship in the first semester, and the second-rate in the second semester, accompanied by two titles of "outstanding student cadre" in both the college and department level.
Year 2007-2008: I attained the third-rate scholarship in the second semester, accompanied by two titles of "outstanding student cadre" in both the college and department level.
About Activities:
July to August in the 2009: practiced in the Lenovo store and was named the outstanding intern.
April, 2009: took part in the lenovo-hosted competition "the creative marketing idea superstar competiton",(肯定不能去直译,我小变了一下下) and won the third prize.
May 29, 2008 to June 15, 2008：participated in the second science and employment training camp hosted by
Changchun Tax affairs Institute, and
because of my good ability in organization and management, I was rewarded "execellent cadres".
September 2008 - September 2009: acted as the vice-chairman of the Success-study Amateur Association.
September 2007 - September 2008: was awarded "excellent individuals" at the Success-study Amateur Association.
October 2007: attained Excellence Award in the freshman "elite cup" oral English contest hosted by the college of Industry and Commerce.
According to the MBTI vocational character test, my personality tendency is "ISFJ" (Introversion, Sensing, Feeling, Judgment).
后面的我给你个关于此类性格的英文原版分析,你挑出些能用的写上吧,觉得你的汉语版的这块逻辑关系不是很强
I – Introversion preferred to Extraversion: ISFJs tend to be quiet and reserved. They generally prefer interacting with a few close friends rather than a wide circle of acquaintances, and they expend energy in social situations (whereas extraverts gain energy).[7]
S – Sensing preferred to iNtuition: ISFJs tend to be more concrete than abstract. They focus their attention on the details rather than the big picture, and on immediate realities rather than future possibilities.[8]
F – Feeling preferred to Thinking: ISFJs tend to value personal considerations above objective criteria. When making decisions, they often give more weight to social implications than to logic.[9]
J – Judgment preferred to Perception: ISFJs tend to plan their activities and make decisions early. They derive a sense of control through predictability. [10]
好运哦,祝你尽快找到好工作哦
（最后请问下,这到底是100分的还是200的?）