句子语病诊断
请判断句子:“在温暖的阳光照耀下,含羞树的花朵在阳光下飞舞.”是否有语病
人气:395 ℃ 时间:2020-03-23 18:07:09
解答
有.
有多种改法:
1.在温暖阳光的照耀下,含羞树的花朵在飞舞.
2.在温暖的阳光下,含羞树的花朵在飞舞.
总之,后半句“在阳光下”必须要去掉,因为它与前面重复.
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