谁能告诉我这篇自我介绍有没有语法上的错误?
Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the English spoken competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF INTERESTES.I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING THE PIANO AND LEARNING ENGLISH.IN ADDITION ,I AM INTERESTED IN SPORTS.THAT IS ALL ,THANK YOU .还有 谁知道 THAT'S ALL的音标?一分钟读这样会不会来不及?