初中英语短文My hobbyHello!My name is Xiaoming.I’m a basketball fan.But _英语解答

初中英语短文My hobby
Hello!My name is Xiaoming.I’m a basketball fan.But I used to be a movie fan.My interests are changing all the time.I used to enjoy playing computer game,and I wasn’t interested in sports at all.But now,my hobby is doing sports like basketball and reading news.And I never miss any important basketball games.I used to know little about paintings.But now I like collecting them.
Do you share my interests?
问一下这里语法哪里错了?

人气：313 ℃　时间：2020-03-21 17:22:41

解答

my hobbies are reading news and doing sports,for example,playing basketball.
最好把短的内容放在句子前面一点这样看起来更清晰还有就是你有不止一个hobby 所以应该用are~
另外一个小问题就是 used to这个短语用的太频繁了点.
还有就是最后一句do you share my interests 因为我不清楚你到底是想表达什么意思嘛所以也不好改请问你是打算说“你有和我相同的兴趣吗?”还是“你愿意和我分享我的爱好吗?”如果是前一种那么这句没问题如果是后一种那么就像二楼说的那样应该改为will you share my interests