can someone help me with my poem?
this is again a poem of mine written in my creative writing class.and once again i gotta mentioned that i am not good at English,and don't even know how to write a poem,but not articles.
this poem is about my Dad's death
the day you left home,
it was the last time we met on earth,
you had raise me up
for 14 years
and I hadn't paid for you love yet
you were sick in hospital
far away from home
I never had the chance
to visit you
but heard your voice really sick on phone
I held my tears every time we talked
because I believe you would be home
recover and health
3 months passed
you were home
but with a death body
i blamed on you
you had promised me
you would be back home alive
you broke you words
but i did not have chance
no more to forgave you
I love you DAD.
I want someone help me to correct this poem.not to translate it into Chinese.
Thank you