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A survey shows that one third of the enterprises that ascended into the top 100 of the Fortune (magazine) are eliminated.They are all large-sized enterprises.Why can some enterprises keep themselves strong in the long run,whereas other ones were beset with difficulties(这里你的even be eliminated没有在形容前面的主语）The very important reason is that good enterprises can always actively adapt themselves to changing environments and keep pace closely with the trend of time,while failed entrepreneurs react slowly on this problem.最后这句change too fast for many enterprises to predict 是从句吗 不知道你想表达什么）