请帮忙修正我英语日记中的错误 ,非常感谢Dear ：For improving a writing skill , i will _英语解答

Yesterday evering I have supper in a restauant which i often stayed in .The boss is from GuiZhou Province .he is a young man with an excellent character.Everytime when he saw me,he will smile and asked," May I help you?The beef just came in from the market,it's very fresh.Would you like some?" I replied," Sure." After a while,he finished cooking the beef and serve it personally to me."Please approach me for feedbacks.I will be glad to improve on my cooking." I smiled back and said with beef in my mouth," It's perfect!" This evening,I came into this restaurant for dinner again.He asked ," Does the beef really taste good?Your face don't match with your mouth.It taste terrible,right?" I smiled," Actually your cooking skills still need some improvements." He said," Yesterday,I felt sorrow while I cooked.But most of the time,when I am happy,my food will taste better.So I replied," So when I went into your restaurant to have a meal,I must asked whether are you having a good mood or bad mood?" His face blushed and smile sheepishly.After a while,he said," Of course not,if you like to eat here,I will definitely cook more delicious food and my mood will be better."
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