一段很简单的英语短文,请英语达人帮忙看一下!
I want to tell you about my good friend,Mary.She is a girl. She is my classmate,too.
Mary likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together.Mary is very generous.She is willing to share her things with her friends.And she is very helpful, She always gives her seat to people in need on the bus.
Mary is good at Maths.She always helps me with my Maths.We often go to library together at the weekend. And,Mary is a true friend,When something worries me,I always go to her,I can tell her evertthing because she can keep secrets for me.
I hope we can be good friends forever.
帮忙看一下有没有什么错误,谢谢!
人气:457 ℃ 时间:2020-06-03 10:28:09
解答
如果要写good fd的话,一般都会说a one of my good fd,或者改为my best fd.Will 是没有present continues tense,建议改为She likes to.She will give her seat to other people which in need on the bus.(我认为这...
推荐
猜你喜欢
- 一个长方体的大衣柜,长0.9米,宽0.5米,8米,在它的正面和左右两面刷油漆,刷油漆的面积至少是多少平方米?三个面的面积
- 怎么样用古文来形容自己寄人篱下的感受
- I often play sports when I finish ( )my homework A do B to do C doing D does
- 请说明理由
- 《生命,生命》的作文,是说一棵树被烧焦,来年又长了绿叶.是篇初中的
- 有棵柳树,有几只燕子,有几个人在骑马是什么诗句
- 表演中国功夫,用英语如何说?
- (A)