我先把中文给你改改吧,读不通顺
虽然我的爷爷已经过世很久了,但是我依然很还念他.
I still miss him very much even though he passed away long time ago.
was gone用的很少,比较正式的是 pass away,一般不用dead,太口语了,不太尊重.河里抱上岸）我永远忘不了，他将我抱上岸时那温暖的笑容。这句话的英文怎么说? 感谢！I will never forget the warm smile when he lift me up in his arm on riverside.