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No absence
Nowadays,it is a normal phenomenon that students late for class,even absence from class on many university campus .Where they are?Some are still in bed,while ohers play computer games or make appointment with their girl (boy) friends.
But those students don’t see that attending class can’t separate from our university life.If we late for class even don’t attend class,we can’t get good grades.If we don’t have good grades,we’ll also can’t get good jobs.Someone may think about self-study .Of because we can,although lots of knowledge we can’t understand on the books.
Because when we begin to realize the profits of attending class,it may be too late.We should take actions right now.No late for class!No absence
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评语:长短句搭配合理,词类多样,学术词汇较为丰富;但文中有几个单词拼写错误,结构稍显混乱 No absence Nowadays,it is a normal phenomenon that students late for class,even absence from class on many univers...
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