改错 When I was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles.I hoped I can
when I was in high school .most of my friend had bicycles i hoped i could also have it one day i saw a secondhand bicycle ,that was only one hundred yuan .i ask my father the money but he said he only give me half of the money he should find the other harf myself so i went to sell newspaper after the school .my father was pleased if i showed him the money a month after he gives me the other fifty ,you can imagien hou muchhappy i was when i rode to school on my uwn bicycle
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when I was in high school .most of my 【friends】 had bicycles i hoped i could also have 【one】 one day i saw a secondhand bicycle ,【which】 was only one hundred yuan .i 【asked】 my father 【for some】 money,but he said he only 【gave】me half of the money,【I】should find the other harf myself,so i went to sell 【newspapers】 after 【去掉the】 school.My father was pleased 【when】i showed him the money a month 【later】 he 【gave】 me 【fifty Yuan】 ,you can 【imagine】 【how】 [去掉much]happy i was when i rode to school on my 【new】 bicycle
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