英语高手过来帮我看下这句有没有语病
This is a simple demo from ysy which is a example for popup.In this demo there are too many bugs and errors which I can not save it.And I do only hope youmake it as a demo.Thank you for your supports.
帮我修改下.让他“文辞优美”点,当然首先要求没有语病,谢谢啦.
人气:166 ℃ 时间:2020-03-18 14:47:47
解答
见笑:
This is a simple demo from ysy as a test for pop-up.In this demo you may find many bugs and errors which I can not spare .And I do hope you just take it as a demo.Thank you for supporting.
关于你的语病:
1、which is a example ,a 应为an
2、there are too many bugs and errors which I can not save it.这句中多了个it,把it 去掉,否则为病句.
3、make 用词不当,把.当做.,应该用take
4、这个不是病句,只是Thank you for your supports.英语里比较不喜欢一个单词反复选用,所以前面有了you,后面再有your比较累赘,当然,不算错.
5、不过,支持该是不可数名词吧?不该是your supports的,应去掉“s”.
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