求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?
I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and more.
I don't have a good idea .I have two brothers .they all want to be a doctor .My mother is a ..,my father is a ..They want me can happy every day .Now I must study English very well .I think I can do it last ,I hope everyone good good study ,day day up.That all ,thank you!
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解答
everyone 后面的all 去掉 第二行第五个词 her 改成you 前后一致 然后加上 ,“sorry ,i do not(不要用缩写) know.然后不是Meby 是Maybe第二大段 第一行 a doctor改成 doctors They want me can happy every day 改...
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