dear alice,i have (just->可省略,但不必须） got some good mews to tell to you.i （win->won) a national prize (for->with my) painting last weet.my father was so (pleasing->pleased) that he suggested i go to england for (a->省略) holiday.i'd like to （staying->stay) there for half a month,visiting place of interest (or->and) practicing my english as well.we've been writing to each(+other) for nearly a year now.i have often dreamed of (talk->talking) (face-> face to face) with you.perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.best,lily