so what do you mean?you need a friend or you want someone to point out your errors in the sentence?yeah.so how about u ?good. if you are an earnest english learner, maybe we can be friends and practise. moreover, i do spot some mistakes in your sentence.thanks so much Can add your QQ number?ok ,tell me yours and i will make you an e-palokthis is my qq 497181546and this is email:lacey1213@yeah.netgood ， then see U