My classmate WangLi,whose works(work改为works,作品是works不是work) was published on the school net,won the first prize in our school"s calligraphy competition.Some students hold the opinions that learnig calligraphy is extraordinarily(extrordinary拼写错误,应是extraordinarily,副词才对) important, for it can develop our Chinese traditional cultures.In recent years,many traditional things have been lost (lose改为lost,被动语态) sight of,especially by adolescent.Others,who have the opposite ideas that as the paperless offices become more and more popular,we spend(spent改为一般现在时spend,与前面as从句的become时态相一致) little time in paper-(writing分为有纸书写和无纸书写,加上paper-,以与无纸书写区分)writing.So,it's not neccessary to pratise calligraphy.
修改后整理的全文如下:
My classmate WangLi,whose works was published on the school net,won the first prize in our school"s calligraphy competition.Some students hold the opinions that learnig calligraphy is extraordinarily important, for it can develop our Chinese traditional cultures.In recent years,many traditional things have been lost sight of,especially by adolescent.Others,who have the opposite ideas that as the paperless offices become more and more popular,we spend little time in paper-writing.So,it's not neccessary to pratise calligraphy