修改英语文章,初二水平.
嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.
谢谢大家.
对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起...
The disadvantage of computers
At the moment，more and more students are keen on surfing the Internet,that’s bad for theyhealth.
In facts,some information can prove surfing the Internet is harmful.For example, there’s a game very well-known in a recent, just ‘steal vegetables’. This game leads some students get up in 3 am tosurfing the Internet.They check the e-mails everyday many times and spent a lot of time to talk with net friends that forget time.
For these reasons,they lose interest in study, and the health worse and worse.
I think they are so stupid.They don’t know the importance to sleep?They are making joke to life!
Teenager,we should protect our life，treasure time.so,away the Internet temptation!