以上得到的结论 英语是the above mentioned conclusion还是the conclusion mentioned above
1 为什么我写的是 reaching the above mentioned conclusion does not mean…… 老师要我改为reaching the conclusion mentioned above does not mean……
2 为什么我写的是only by paying more atonly by paying more attention to practical subjects can not solve the problem fundamentally 老师要我改成 only by paying more attention to practical subjects can not be solved the problem fundamentally 是不是only放在句首要倒装啊