这是新概念第六课上面的原文,作者是这么写的Later a neighbour told me about him. Everybody knows him. His name is Percy Buttons. He calls at every house in the street once a month.
你的句子的话,我帮你稍微改动一下,Later, the writer learned from his neighbours that the begger‘s name was Percy Bustons and he alwayscalled at every house onceamonthin this street.
有不会的再问我O(∩_∩)O哈!呵呵，你真厉害，确实是新概念英语2第六课上的，但你能否帮我看一下复合句错在哪里，谢了～1.得知用learn sth from sb，中文是乞丐的事情，翻译直接something about him就行了，没必要event，那是事件、活动2.neighbours比较好，邻居们3.finding 后面从句加that4.用过去式called，因为由found引导要用过去式5.in the street 就行了，没必要this直译其中呢2和5算是比较细了，第1和4是硬伤~