字数太少了,才300多一点…字大点也只能写够一页半,这肯定是不行的.我参加考试的时候至少写450以上.positiveness 和negativeness都不是词,不能随便造.你先放到word里查一遍吧.第一段就出现拼写错误时不能忍的……你这个
作文估计就8分了……那如果多加一个中间段然后减少拼写错误是不是会好一点?SAT写作基本都是四段论的……你写的是toefl作文,不是sat作文吧…sat作文没这么泛泛举例子的其实这是我第一次写SAT作文, 可能有很多问题....请见谅....那SAT作文怎么样才是不泛泛的举例呢? 应该怎么举例?Thomas Edison, almost the most famous inventor in the world, had 1903 patents in his life. Those patents include an extraordinary important to human society invention, the light bulb. Although at first he failed in more than 2000 experiments with platinum and other metal filaments, Edison never give up on his way to the final. He tried so hard to find something that are helpful and learn the reason of accident from the failure to figure out which kind of material is the best. Finally the first successful test came on October 22nd 1897. The light bulb lasted 40 hours long. At November 4th 1879, he filed for US patent 223898 for and electric lamp using a carbon filament. His invention brought human into a new era with light provide by electricity.He did not content by this invention because he thought the price of the carbon filament light bulb was still too high for the poor people. So he dived in to the experiments again and finally found the tungsten filament, which may be afforded by the poor people.少年·,每一个例子至少要这样…虽然很老套,估计也有语法错误,我用这个例子和另外一个得的11分。去xdf慢慢学吧