1.it's also represents错了,应该是it also respresents
2.最后一个happiness应该改为happy(如果我下面的最后一小句改得不好的话),
就挑了两个明显的地方,其他的小地方我也改了
This is China's traditional culture----giving gift to a friend.Several thousands years ago,the ancient Chinese invented the fan,people use it to bring cool wind in the summer.Moreover,because the fan also looks like a circle,so it also represents happiness and reunion,Now,I give it to you,hope it can bring happiness to you and your family.
最后一小句,我把hope you and your family can be happy改为it can bring happiness to you and your family,因为can be 好像说的人家本来不happy这是中国的传统-----把礼物给朋友This is ond of China's traditional things---fan不好意思，是one of不是ond of，打错了