帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么问题,快
Dear Liu Yun,
Hi!I am Xu Xinyi.Anne is my english name.I am happy to have a new pen pal.I live in Ningbo with my mom and dad,Ningbo is a beautiful city.Welcome to Ningbo!I don't have a sister or brother,but I hope to have one.I have a small family,but it is coziness.There are three people in my family--father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher.She works in school.She is slightly fat,but she is very optimistic.She often say:"laugh and be fat."She likes listening to music.And my father is a boss.He is very tall and thin.I love my father,because I take after one's father.He likes basketball very much,he is a loyal fans.I like riding my bike and drewing pictures.What about you?
我都是自己写的,请各位英语好点的快点看看,帮我挑挑下,不好的句子删掉,有语病改掉,还可以适当的加些句子的,快,