请给我看一下这篇英语作文,改一下语法错误,
Nowadays,Shanghai is really an attractive city with many landmarks.Every year,many visitors come to visit Shanghai.If someone comes to Shanghai,he may go to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.It’s one of the tallest buildings in Shanghai,also in the world.Shanghai is a modern city,it’s known as the Shopping Paradise.We can buy many things from all over the world in Nanjing Road.It’s the busiest street in Shanghai.And we will have a Disney Park in Shanghai in the future.At that time,Shanghai must be an attractive city.
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解答
Shanghai is a modern city,it’s known as the Shopping Paradise.这句可能有点错误.这句话有两个主语,虽然主语是一样的.但最好中间添加连接词如and,或改为从句形式,如Shanghai,which is known as the Shopping Par...
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