I brush against him
你是第一次写英文诗歌吧?英语不同于中文,没那么多词韵,美不美主要靠语音的押韵和词语的搭配.一首中文很漂亮的英文诗,其原文往往很简单,是翻译得很唯美而已.
下面两首都是很优美的诗,原文也很平淡
perhaps they've passed by each other a million times?或许他们曾无数次擦肩而过?
A traveler came by,一个行人与我擦肩而过