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I went to Beijing with my parents one year ago.I went to The Summer Palace on that trip.I went fishing in a small .And I row a boat(划船 不知道是不是这样说）on the Kumming lake.I had lunch in a restaurant near the Summer Palace.We sat on the grass.Listened the birds singingand smelled the flowers.That's so fun.I can't forget it.
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人气：282 ℃ 时间：2020-04-17 11:31:13
解答
one year ago改last year
on that trip改during the trip
I went fishing in a small?不完整
And I row a boat改I went boating
We sat on the grass.Listened the birds singingand smelled the flowers改We sat on the grass while the birds sang.没有smell the flower这种说法,太中国
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