哥哥,五分有点少了,加点嘛!
If I have a lot of money,then .
I would use the money in the following areas
First I would buy books I want to see,I think that knowledge is power,I need to recharge
The second point I would buy a big house,Shanghai's housing prices are expensive,I live in the environment of a small place is not good.
Third,I prepared for her to give pensions for the elderly when they can live a comfortable If I have a lot of money,I will share with my family and Children should not have too much money,parents should strictly adhere to good use their money to make money and cultivate their independence and a good habit of thrift and economy.Told them the money should be well spent.
可以缩短一些不必要的段落.