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Hi!My name’s Jane Green,I am 8 years old.And I live the US.My school is in New York,I’m in Class Two,Grade Two.I love my school.My friend is Alen Clack.His telephone number is 257-9482.I have telephone number,too.It’s 302-3114.I can tell him my things everyday.I think of my telephone is nice!