请问这段话有语法错误吗?
When asked about your job has more affected on your happiness than
your social life does or not.Some People argued that they feel enjoyable and
substantial during the work time.Enhance,they think jobs bring majority
enjoyments to them.But the others disagree with it and claimed that the social
life brings them pleasure more than work does.In my opinion,social activitieseffect on my delight more.