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To mickey
Hello,this is my holiday.At about 2008 Aguest the second.
I took a bus osaided to the city at about eight kilograng.I 离开(过去式） at 7'o clock and 到达（过去式） at 7:20.In the morning I went fishing and in the afternoon I took photos.Was it fun?What about your holiday?Was it fun too?
From LiHua