My friend
I have a best friend.Her name is Wang Lin.She is 13 years old and she very kind!Her school name is No.35 Middle school.Wang Lin 'favoufite subject is English.he like playing computer and guita .She can sing the song and dance!She want to be the singer!Wang Lin is my best friend.
跟你说,英文的作文是总分形式的!结尾不用总结,而且那个Want to …visit the Great Wall这个啊不用!