英语写作.帮忙看有语法错没.
提示：
1.为了实现理想,你应该做些什么?
P.S.因为不少于40个词,希望大家帮我想想再加一个什么句子.
I want to be entrepreneur.I think it is a very exciting job.I like the job very much.Because it make much money.But I must study hard every day.